Constructive feedback--
Maybe could have been titled "What could have been?..." All these guys have had solid careers, but for one reason or another, didnt reach their full potential.
Maybe throw in some oddball players like Jonathon Bender, Stromile Swift or Marcus Fizer - some high draft picks that didnt make it..."What ever happened to Marcus Fizer? - Turns out he represented the US in the Goodwill Games in Brisbane...then played in Spain, Puerto Rico, Israel and back to Puerto Rico...with Antoine Walker!
I liked the style of the article....but most people would know the stories behind the players you chose. I reckon you could get some more readers if you went a little left field.
And grammar... it's hard to read through anything that has spelling/punctuation errors throughout.
Keep it mate....you could be writing for nba.com or espn before you know it!